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Fix top-level issues before attending to things like grammar and phrasing. Here's the order of attack when you revise:

  1. Story structure and details (the lesson, anecdotes, and details)
  2. Prose (transitions, clarity, economy, and word choice)
  3. Polish (grammar, formatting, and word limits)
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